Monday, June 14, 2021

My Writing Feedback


This is my feedback and things I need to work on from my lawyer paragraph. I really enjoyed make my lawer paragraph. I wonder what paragraph I will learn next.  

1 comment:

  1. Hi kaycee wow you did really awesome and your feedback is great and i really liked in your piece the facts and precision great job

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