My Writing Feedback

This is my feedback and things I need to work on from my lawyer paragraph. I really enjoyed make my lawer paragraph. I wonder what paragraph I will learn next.  

My Gamefroot Game

This is my new gamefroot game I still need to do a bit more coding but this is what I got so far. It was really interesting to learn how to code. I really enjoyed making my character  and doing the background. I wonder what else I can do for coding.